Okay, so I’ve realized I have to bite the bullet and learn to do some graphics stuff or else be dependent on other people, which is irritating. So here’s an attempt at a postcard advertising my classes, which I thought I’d use at cons to promote them. I know this is lame, but suggestions are very welcome. First up is a different font, I think.
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"(On the writing F&SF workshop) Wanted to crow and say thanks: the first story I wrote after taking your class was my very first sale. Coincidence? nah….thanks so much."
I’m pleased to announce that the Rambo Academy for Wayward Writers is once again expanding its offerings.
This answers a question that writers have expressed to me over and over again in workshops, on panels, in e-mail and one-on-one conversations, including several of the mentoring sessions I did last weekend at DragonCon:
How do I find a writing group of other fantasy and science fiction writers so I can trade critiques?
I’ve got an answer now that I feel 100% happy with: the Rambo Academy for Wayward Writers #Critclub.
#CritClub is an online space where fantasy and science fiction writers of all levels can talk with each other and exchange story and novel critiques. Its Discord server provides chat rooms where members can trade critiques as well as discuss market news, tips, and trends, recent rejections, and supportive advice and feedback. Critiquing is totally optional and there is no pressure to participate! Join for the gossip and chatter if you feel so inclined.
Ways to sign up for #Critclub:
How the Critclub Critique System Works
Members receive 3 credits when they sign up; everyone currently participating has 3 as well.
The cost of putting a story up for critique is:
You earn credits at the same rate. Credits are non-transferable.
Initially this will run on the honor system; if need be, we’ll add something more formal. Tips and formatting for critiquing are here, but as a rule of thumb, critiques should be at least 250 words (ish) and address developmental issues rather than line edits (unless the author requests otherwise).
Additional Rambo Academy for Wayward Writers Community Benefits
Each week, channel #thepanel will feature discussion centered on a specific topic, sometimes with guest moderators to lead discussion. September’s topics are: Week 1: Conventional Talk (Whether Conventions are worthwhile and how to make the most of them), Week 2: The Coaxing, Care, and Feeding of Story Ideas, Week 3: The Fine Art of Rejectomancy, or How to Use Rejections to Get Better, and Week 4: What’s the Slush Pile Like?
Channels include Rejectomancy for discussing submissions, Motivation, Market News and Book Club for discussing recent reading, among others.
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I’m glad I’ve got enough students for the Editing 101 online class that starts tonight, but I’d love a couple more. Mention reading this when you mail me about the class and I’ll give you a special deal. 😉
So what do we do and who is the class aimed at?
The class is aimed both at writers who want to learn to edit their work better as well as editors who want to hone their skills and learn about it as a career path.
Here’s what the three two-hour sessions cover. They’re spaced two weeks apart.
Got questions? I’d be happy to answer them.
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Is the whole graphic the post card, with the cat image in the background? Don’t feel you need to lose valuable space for your words by scrunching them together in the corner. Give them a little room. One tip is to keep your sentences short and sharp, something a person can digest in a glance. I’d suggest your opening line read: Take your writing to the next level! Fewer words, and a sharp declarative.
I like that Courier-type font. But I am no designer.
Fwiw, a friend has used GIMP to design his own covers for four of his books; he says that once he got used to the interface it was a pretty powerful program. (I assume from the title of your post that you’re playing around in GIMP.)
Just my few thoughts. And of course, like literary criticism, this is all IMHO, and use or don’t. I could be full of crap. It’s been known to happen before.
Nice photo selection and the weighting on the lower right feels pretty good for asymmetry. I agree, you want a nicer looking font. If you’re just doing this as an online ad, you have a lot of choices for fonts meant to be read on the screen, although with higher resolutions that starts to be mitigated and you can have a wider range.
Use higher resolution unless this is meant to be 640×480 (which will only work as an online ad).
You might want to rethink the crop of the image. Show more of the eyes at the top of the cat glass bulb, right now there’s just a sliver, not enough to give us the “it’s looking at me” feeling, and not cropped off. It feels like a mistake instead of being on purpose.
I would suggest rewrite second paragraph to continue focus of first sentence. “Be launched to new heights of productivity as Cat Rambo’s online classes teach you”¦” or some such. While the focus of the sentence is still the reader, burring them six words in defuses the hook. Also, make the ad about them. Sure, it’s for your classes, but as David Ogilvy (I think) said, “I could make an full page ad in the NYTs that was only text. The first line would read, ‘This ad is all about you”¦’ and you would read the entire ad.”
Try ghosting a white box over the background instead of a solid blue box. The white will need to desaturate, and push the tones of the photo toward the lighter end of the spectrum to make the text as readable as possible. the box also feels a little large, it’s too close to the center, but not on it. Think of proportions of 2 to 3 or 3 to 5 for a more pleasing arrangement (this small, I would go with visual proportion instead of by the numbers).
You don’t need the “http://”, at this time most kids get that part, and very few of us old timer ever type it in anyway. The “www.” is enough for people to get it’s a website (actually, the “.com” is all that’s needed, but some people’s configurations differ). That will help the text look a little cleaner.
Finally, with the line breaks it feels to me like you’re shaping the text (the ragged right makes a nice over all curve if you average out the ends). And both paragraphs end with one word on the last line. Try to avoid that.
Hope that all helps.
I like the design, but I’m iffy on courier, but anything other than Comic Sans is probably a win. I have played with GIMP a bit now and like it, though I do prefer InDesign and Photoshop which I used regularly back when the fed paid me to design
As irritating as I know it is to depend on other people, I’ve learned that sometimes it’s better to use my time on my strengths, rather than trying to learn something that other people have already mastered. I mean, if you truly want to learn graphic design, that’s one thing. But if you would rather be spending your time on writing, editing, and teaching, then it might be wiser to delegate the task out, rather than learning the idiosyncrasies of GIMP and the rules of graphic design. Perhaps you could trade postcard design for a story crit or something? I’d be happy to help you out, as would, I’m sure, many other talented graphics people in the SF-writing world. (Not to say that your postcard attempts so far are horrible–they’re fine and should suffice for your purposes. Just that, as a visual arts person, I do see a bunch of things that could be improved to help make them better. As an editor, you know how it is…) OTOH, if you want to learn because you want to learn, then I’m happy to give you tips.
I think that’s true, and for something important, I’d spring to hire someone. But I’d like to be able to throw together prototypes, at the least, I like messing around with graphics, and sometimes when one is a habitual procrastinator, it’s good to know these things. 😉